Be still the hatred in my heart
The last embrace
before two lovers part
Fate and choice
Decided from the start
Remember now
Life is the highest art
Goodbye Casandra
The passion of my life thus far
Entwined forever in the dark
Bring love with you
Wherever it is you are
And when darkness falls
You are the divine spark
Goodbye Casandra
The love of my life thus far
Entwined forever in the dark
Be still the regrets in my mind
No more sadness left for me to find
Be still the fury in my soul
Be still Oh chaos I control
The bonds are broken
We are free
The connection permanently with me
Be still Oh burning memories
Be still
Author notes
I wrote this in rehab.
A contest entry
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A love is a very hard thing to get over.
Thanks for entering. -
Wow. This is really good. I love the rhyme scheme and the emotion that you expressed was great! Excellent write and good luck in the contest
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Your ability to express emotions through your words is exceptional.
Amazing job.
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Oh..
I'm so sorry for your loss, losing the love of your life, or who you think is, is one of the most painful experience a human can feel.
More then a sprain, more then a break. Again. i'm sorry for your loss.
But you're an amazing guy and don't let this hold you back, or you will regret it..
'Be still the regrets in my mind
No more sadness left for me to find
Be still the fury in my soul
Be still Oh chaos I control
The bonds are broken
We are free'
Don't Regret Chris, or things will be so much harder to push through. I'm here for you,
Laura. <3
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thank you for your encouragement and kind words. i appreciate you. I wont let feelings hold me back anymore i promise to myself. The pain has helped me grow. This poem is like a prayer for me it helps me relax these strong feelings i feel much better with this poem in existence.
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Oh Amazing
You are a wonderful writer. I love what you write keep it up dear. -
[♥] I'll have to comment again later. Grams is wanting on.
Iloveoyu.
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Stay safe.
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