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Ratchet: Deadlocked

Ratchet
A simple Lombax
Kidnapped by Vox
And made to fight in Dread Zone
Dallas and Juanita constantly insult him
Although he kicks robot butt
To stay alive, blowing apart Vox robots and secrets
Aided by Merc and Green, they all fight
With Clank behind in the containment suite, watching over Ratchet
Battle after battle with Exterminators
Using Raptors, Vulcan Cannons, and Rail Gun Launchers
Racing against time in Hoverbikes, blowing up quasar orbs with the Landstalker
Blowing up cameras with the Puma, and then Destroying Everything with the Hovership
All in the life of Ratchet, not sure of how he will survive
Swinging his wrench, grinding rails in boots
All in a normal day's work.

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  • Bella Cullen
    September 12, 2008
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    i really didn't get this one. it confused me...but i like it.


  • Ravensdark
    June 22, 2008

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    I like the game it has a nice mixture of violence humour and cute little cuddly whatsits....the poem shares the same qualities....nice write


  • peridotPixi
    May 22, 2008

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    nathan hasnt really played this game, i've never heard of it, it sounds kinda like quake so that is probably why he siad that he played it, i like the flow of this poem, thank you for entering and good luck -Amy


  • nathan8
    May 20, 2008
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    i have played it-nathan8


  • infernalxfidelity
    May 20, 2008

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    ah, i love this. i'm not a huge gamer, but i can understand them. this was just as awesome and entertaining as my friends "legend of Zelda" timeline theory...
    i actully really enjoyed reading it. it was excellent.

    good luck in the contest.

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