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The Pond

Melodic crashing of
Water off the glistening cliff--
The pond reflecting tranquility and calmness--
Songbirds in the allegorical branches
That provide shade
For the squirrels scurrying
Amidst the newly-blossomed flowers.
Heaven on Earth.

A contest entry

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 27, 2008
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    this is beautiful


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    oh so true.. wonderful words worthily written, m'dear. A lovely piece indeed! Best of luck with the entry!!