False bliss;
Hit and miss;
That scheming demon;
And his deadly kiss;
I'm self absorbed;
Lifeless and bored;
Obscured;
With a fool's mentality;
I'd rather live my day's;
In a fake reality;
So shall we?
And I really don't mind;
Living with a little denial;
If the effect of that thought;
Means feeling blissful for awhile;
False bliss;
Im fiending for my demon;
And his seductive kiss;
That satisfying saltiness;
Is it wrong?
Do I care?
No, not really;
Not when it comes down to happiness versus despair;
So dance;
My wicked little demon;
Dance right into that black abyss;
And bring to me, my nefarious one..
Bring to me my false bliss.
A contest entry
- just enter. by Trinsa.
420 points, ended June 7, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options!!!! Anything goes. by Jaffa-.
550 points, ended December 10, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Another one that I feel. You go really deep with your writing.
I love reading this kind of poetry. It is real and not full of falseness. I can't stand fake people. I'm really liking your style. -
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well written (as if i care about the words, it's the message they convey that counts) i think living in a fake reality is ok, but i try to change my reality by playing the fool lol......i think i'm winning lol
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This was really really good. Such deep meaning. I really loved it. Very creative and rather origional. I really liked the layout and the language. Very well done and good luck.
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I'm all for dodging reality as much as possible, too. It is definitely overrated.
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Thanks for entering!
Nice work on this one. Short, Meaningful, and to the point. Im glad you entered this contest. I enjoyed reading this very much. I also enjoyed the rhyming you used very wisely.
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Wow this is really good. I remember now why i used to read so much of your poetry back in the day. Do you still remember me?
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