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I want to be your older brother

Step breathe and take another breath,
Relax no worries,
Just calmly listen to me,
I'll help you out with any problems,
You can always count on me,
Think clearly,
Open your eyes,
See me there next to you,
Laying beside you,
Holding you telling you everything is ok,
Take my hand,
Feel my touch,
Relax and unclunch,
You are almost there,
To where you need to be,
In my arms Calming you down,
Listen to the peaceful sound,
Of my heart next to yours.

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I want to be your older brother
So I wrote you this poem

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  • hardwire
    May 20, 2008

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    cool!!!!!!!

    hey bro!!!!!!!!
    this is sooooooooooooooooooo nice!!!!!!!!!!! hope you mean it..... KL is kind of my AP twin sister. well almost.


  • Short but cute
    May 20, 2008
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    This is so sweet!


  • forever and ever
    May 20, 2008

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    this is so sweet. i'm priveleged to have you as my brother. do you mind being the brother of the other girls on here too?? they're a lot like me. my twin especially.