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[ there is a girl in her room ]

there is a girl in her room
the sun is so bright
the house has no sound
it is so peasefull

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  • greyhaime silver member
    May 21
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    Welcome to allpoetry

    welcome to the site, and thanks for sharing this with us here.
    a bit short, not bad, but I think it needs a bit more.but that is just my opinion.
    keep it flowing, and if you have any questions or need any help with the site, just let me know and I can help out where I can.
    cheers
    Grey
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