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sun setting

sun setting
cactus shadows lurk no more
a sidewinder sleeps

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  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    Oh, I like that you have looked deeply into the picture. Very well written. Nice. Thank you for sharing.
    Kelli


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    Really enjoyed this haiku--it was so unique with the "sidewinder sleeps" in the last line. Good luck in the contest!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 20, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt

    Good luck in the contest