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Past Times

Once again I stopped somewhere in the past...
Returning to that day that was our last...
All the things we shared came back so fast.
Here I am back in a forgotten time...
When I was yours and you were mine...
Those moments with you were just so fine.
Everything ended how it should...
Now I wish to change it all if I could...
If I ask for forgiveness I'm sure you would.
I'm standing before the place we first met...
But believing you wish to return isn't my best bet...
Only memories of our past is all I now can ever get.
Everyone to me look like a bunch of mimes...
Leaving you topped the list in my many crimes...
As everything fades I stand in a silence of past times.

The past has an ability to haunt the mind and the heart.

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  • oikevois baby gold member
    May 26
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    Yuck I hate my past. Well done!!

    Mylee

    • Climax gold member
      May 26
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      Too bad it's so hard to forget... Or better said... One can never forget.

  • Enchanting Angel
    May 22

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    I so agree

    I agree whole heartedly. I hate my past yet love it as well. You are an amazing writer. keep up the good work.


    • Climax gold member
      May 22
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      You might say you are ugly... But your display picture say oterwise... You are VERY cute hun. Thanks for the comment. Love ya lots!

  • InsanityDies
    May 21

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    You shouldn't live in the past times
    cause it only leads to suicide
    Even though your love was lost
    Don't hold on to things
    That you know will only huant you
    As you stand before the place
    you two first met
    leave all memeories behind
    as you walk away in regret
    Now step a foot ahead in time
    So past times
    will never catch up again.

    Im sorry i had to write a short poem about this, it could have been longer, but i didnt want to say it all. it might not make since to u, but it was just what came out, lol.

    I like this poem alot.


    • Climax gold member
      May 22

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      Everything makes sense to me... As for everything you typed within your poem... It's easier said then done.

      The past can't easily be erased. It can be blocked but once you re-enter the time again by sight of something that was once there, memories come crashing down on you without thinking twice... And that's when one comes to see how "As everything fades I stand in a silence of past times".

  • Deathless1
    May 21

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    i am sure she would forgive,lol.
    and we can all feel where you are coming from with it.
    the last line is amazing and it left me breathless.
    live in the now.

    great write,
    KNIGHT TIME

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