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The Grim Girl

This girl had dreams,
But they were broken.
This girl had friends,
But they were awoken.
Awoken by her own pain.
This girl had a family,
But they were a drain.
She wished with all her soul,
That someone would love her,
And never let go.
So she prayed and prayed.
Until all hope faded.
And when no one came,
She found a corner,
And that's where she stayed.

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  • Full of sorrow

    Well that is very sad. There are days when I guess it takes everything out of us to stand tall and to remember who we are and why we are here and somtimes that day may never come, but just remember that by someone you will always be loved. And even tho right now you are hurting and for the moment expierincing the worst pain ever felt, tomorrow is a brand new day. And tho it may be the same, and feel the same, and just be just another day, it isnt just another day, it is the day, to make a change!

    Everything will be fine in time, you'll see!

    Thank you for sharing.
    HAve a great day.
    God Bless.
    ~Only1love4ever