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Will You Come With Me?

Will you come with me?
Where the sun meets the sea.
Where our souls can be free,
And our minds can agree...

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  • Akarian silver member
    May 23, 2008
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    Lovely! So short yet profound. You reallly are an awesome writer! =)


  • willowprincess
    May 22, 2008
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    you've totally captured the meaning of short and sweet. love it!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    Sis...I have missed you and your poems so very much! My sweet girl...my very first ap friend.

    I love you!

    Az


  • pen-inhand
    May 20, 2008

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    I'VE MISSED YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

    So glad your back again! And with such a sweet entrance doth you come!~ Big Hug Kelly


  • Innocent Evil
    May 20, 2008
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    I love it, its short and sweet! Amazing, i can just imagine it!


  • lemonhead
    May 20, 2008

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    Wow, its been a while! I've missed reading your poems! This one is absolutly great! I love the rhyming!


  • penman gold member
    May 20, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Short, but so touching. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.

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