I held you in my arms
kissed your precious lips
watched you when you were sleeping
and now I miss your softened skin
I opened up to you
I'd never had to anyone before
but all you did was hurt me
should I forgive you once again
Holding hands was just a game to you
Every kiss you gave was just a lie
you told me you'd never do this
and to trust you was my mistake
Even Now that your gone I still feel lost
and I can't live without you here
you were my life my sweet addiction
and now I'm suffering
I've never come apart before
I thought I never would
but after everything
It’s finally happened
And I’m undone
A contest entry
- Trapped In Fear by Darkest Lover.
400 points, ended May 21, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Full of deep emotion, loss and betrayal....I especially liked your last verse,
'I've never come apart before
I thought I never would
but after everything
It’s finally happened
And I’m undone'
best wishes in your contest.
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I Loved It
I Absolutely Loved It
So Much Lostness So Much Pain
And Tears
I Loved It
Thanks For Entering
And Good Luck
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