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Just the reverse

It has been said
God is the product of human weakness
As if a man could create God
On the other hand …. Man
A creation of immense complexity
Beyond even our understanding
A man cannot understand his own existence
His purpose for being and existing
His destiny after a short journey here
No man has it all figured out
In his weakness he is given hope
In the knowledge that
Beyond his quest for purpose
His search for knowledge
Someone does have all the answers...

Man is the product of divine strength and wisdom


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  • Truetome
    May 30, 2008

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    what a hopeful poem you have written here daddy, we must have "divine strength and wisdom" within us somewhere ... from God as He created us. If we just turn it over to Him and believe in HIM and God is so giving and merciful HE grants us "wisdom" when we need it and when we ask and listen. Thank you for sharing about God with us:::: congratulations on the honorable mention! LOVE, prettypoetry


  • Purush
    May 21, 2008
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    Allthe best

    good poem with strong feelings highlighting the wisdom of human beings
    All the best in my contest


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    Wonderfully said Mark. Loved it.
    Thanks for sharing such a piece with Ap. Some could use the touch of these words.

    Always
    Tory


  • Hope Angel silver member
    May 20, 2008
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    this is really good daddy
    I love you and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    We will never quence our search for knowledge while we live in these imperfect bodies that's for sure!! Good to know someone has all the answers to the questions we seek!


  • Applehead
    May 20, 2008
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    Excellent

    Amen!


  • quack silver member
    May 20, 2008
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    daddy this is really good
    i love you so much


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    May 20, 2008

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    oh daddy nice question you have put forth:S as if Man created God:S its a great approach and how you developed your poem daddy is superb i adored it loads and God is love he loved us so much that gave his son to save us

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