Life is run on nothing but time
People have a choice if they want to pull a crime
People choose on the way that live
It was their choice use that shiv
No matter what choices you make
You will never truely take the cake
You might say yes, you might say no
But it was your choice to sleep with that ho
Time will tell how each life was lived
But please don't tell me what you did
You said someone forced you to pull those crimes
All you'll be doing is some time
He isn't in trouble, you're no snitch
He basically made you into a prison house bitch
Author notes
Xhtaedwen
A contest entry
- Prime. Rhyme . Time (Must vote contest) by Legend.
2000 points, ended May 25, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Time is such a fateful snitch!
It always tells. KL
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I couldn't help reading this with a rap rhythm - I enjoyed it too. Good Luck in the contest. ~Von
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I must agree that in places the rhythm and flow lose me, yet... I think you did well and sent an important message out in this little rap style entry. Well done and good luck.
Shaz xx
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Wicked poem!!!...I too am a Spidey fan...short, elegant...there were a couple of spelling errors, but even so, they don't detract from the down to earth feel of this poem.
Telling it how it is...I like muchly!!!
Thanks for sharing this,
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wow i like this and i happen to have had a crush on spider man as a younger girl do not laugh this was a very nice job you penned here
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A little bit off rhythm for me and an interesting topic... Yes it is all in our own choices and no one elses...
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this has the feel of a rap, i like rap so you have in enjoying this piece The rhyme if quite good(just a little off in parts) but none the less it does not spoil the overall effect Good luck in the contest Thank you for entering
A little typo line 13 your/you're
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heh
funny thing is i dont rap
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