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natural beauty

afternoon moon shines
clouds float on white air wisps
red rock clings to sand

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haiku
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  • Candy6
    May 31, 2008
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    Nice haiku


  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    A beautifully written haiku. I think you did an awesome job with this. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Very interesting contrast here... I had to look at the picture to actually grasp what you were saying... But, I did like the initial image you gave me.. with out the pic.

    Very nice haiku

    • carole21
      May 22, 2008
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      thanks

      appreciate the comments . . nature only !!