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Lioness
Deep Tigress
Dancing; floating in the air

Wheels turning
Desirous behaviour burning

Saviour
Are you my saviour?

....Speaking with no tongue
Salivation with no distasteful hate

Creating a ball of fury
Primitive
That funnels
Out the wispy ignorance through rusting channels

Flannels on my face
I wipe
Taking a swipe at the
Heavy weight crashing down

What'll a swipe do?
'Not much', I say with knowing negativity

We are all in this theatrical play
Attached with dog collars and chains
But there are those who can break away

Only when we bare ourselves
from the costumes chosen for us
Do we become our true selves

There are those that can break away
There are those that can break away

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  • Nostalgia
    May 20, 2008
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    Wow, all I can say is your muse is on, because you write fast, and relitivly well. I can't say I like the repitition, and some of your wording was off. But it was very strong. And very true. I liked the vivedness and truth embedded in this piece. Keep writing.