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just like you

i'm just a girl
just like you
i have thoughts
and feelings too

i'm just human
just like you
i can breathe
just like you do

my heart beats
my heart aches
if i cry
my heart breaks

i've always been this way
from the moment i was concieved
in 18 years and 8 months
you'll see what i've achieved

mommy, please don't hurt me
please don't make me die
you'll be happy that you kept me
if you just hear me cry

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sister (twin)
hun, i believe that a baby is human from the moment it's concieved. fetus is just another word for human, just like baby, todler, child, teen, grownup, and elderly. i might be only 17 but i know what life is about. i know how to make my way. just need someone to talk to

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  • kachina lover
    May 20
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    Beautifully written!! i love it!! perfect twin!! lol.