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Making Love

Offer 100% of your soul
Add your entire body (own it no more)
Make your time available
Stir in compassion, kindness, tenderness, patience, joy, peace and self control
Blend in forgiveness, understanding, and tolerance
Share trials, triumphs, joys, sadness, pain, gain, rain and sun
Mix in the ordinary, boring and mundane
Unite in spiritual, emotional and physical intimacy frequently
Join until two become one
Never separate

Author notes

Making love is so much more than having sexual intercourse.

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 22, 2008
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    excellent~

    This is perfect
    Will read more later
    Hurting really bad today
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • michellemybelle gold member
    May 20, 2008
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    Perfect recipe! Amen!
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • Cyprien
    May 20, 2008
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    I agree entirely. I've found by observation that sex has been fabricated into this idea that not only goes against traditional beliefs, but has slowly and powerfully corrupted our world in many ways. I love how the poem sounds like a recipe. It's very sweet (not pun intended), and I'm glad they're are others that believe in a deeper love than what man has created.