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A sonnet on the freedom of an open mind

The box always you put yourself inside
Never shows up till you've met the end
Knowing of these while you are alive
Allows you to see them and transcend
Nothing gives this fragile world a scare
More than seeing another way of life
Seeing the box and knowing that it's there
Is the only way to be able to make it right
There's an example of a boxed up word
Nothing meaning something to only you
If doing the right thing can be blurred
Others would say it was the wrong thing to do
No one knows the cage in which they live
Those who see it can and will forgive

Author notes

yay.. horrible at sonnets, i was bored this morning.. oh well, let me know what you think.. where i could improve
peace all
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  • The Otep
    May 20, 2008
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    Horrible? This is nothing horrible!! Sonnets are always so hard to write *that is why I usually do not bother too much- I have been working on one for MONTHS and it is still not finished!lol*
    I love this one. It is very creative and imaginative. The wording is amazing, it takes me to another world
    *Greatness*