Years unfold as you sort anxieties out
and passions are revisited free of doubt.
Romantic sparks ignite in tinder hearts
as love’s burning flame spontaneously starts.
Self confidence can exude sensuality
arousing feelings of sexuality.
Seductive flirts work to tame and inflame
exploring yearnings without blame or shame.
Tender touches are a prelude to bliss
as rapture’s reborn in an innocent kiss.
Sharing affections elicit foreplay
inspiring two lovers to go all the way.
Fantasy dreamers by fulfilling a dream
conquer their fears and low self-esteem.
Loving spirits recapturing their prime
will experience a brief journey through time.
A contest entry
- just enter. by Trinsa.
420 points, ended June 7, 2008, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Congrates on the Bronze!
Such a pleasure reading you, and what a very wonderfully inscribed and expressed piece here you share. All the best in all you do my friend.
-Timothy
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it made me cry =[
it was honestly excellent though....
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nice
nicely penned . . liked "passions are revisted free of doubt" and "Delicate touches are prelude to bliss" . . good luck in the contest . .
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You have courage. Rhymed poetry is not an easy thing to write.
It seems that some of the rhyming is a bit forced, and I am not hearing an even flow in the meter when I read it out loud. However, this is a very sensous piece that has an energy to it.
Good job!
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flawless write
first stanza realy grabbed my attention and the rest flowed right through bravo poet
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The flow of this was nearly flawless with a wonderful message that lies within it. Best of luck to you in the contest, you should do well with it.
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Excellent Poem
I thought this poem is a sweet and kind poem i could tell where the heart was when you wrote this poem.
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What a solace, a lost love never lost at all. I thought this was beautiful, reads effortlessly and passionately. I get to the end and there is just this quiet contemplative smile that lingers on... 'Untethered from fear and low self esteem / .. inspired by a brief journey through time'.... I LOVE IT.
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