I've got to be
strong
and put it all
on the line
Can't show any
weakness
or back down
this time.
Say it's all,
or nothing at all,
all the way,
or no way at all.
Can't stumble,
can't falter,
Can't let
myself fall.
Can't let you
sidetrack me,
Can't let you
disarm me,
Sweep me off
my feet,
Sweet talk me,
and charm me.
I've got to be
strong,
and believe
what they say,
That if you
truly love me,
Wild horses, won't
drag you away.
Author notes
Option one How this song "Wild Horses" makes me feel.
A contest entry
- Wild Horses by Once Upon A Mind.
600 points, ended June 10, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I've got to be
strong
and put it all
on the line
Can't show any
weakness
or back down
this time.
I've got to be
strong,
and believe
what they say,
That if you
truly love me,
Wild horses, won't
drag you away.wonderful we all have to be strong congratulations on your shiny and thank you for sharing your poem with the group

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Liked the flow of these lines, the brevity and the gold you received for writing this. Way to go.
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Wow! I love this! Congrats on getting the well deserved Gold! You did extremely well with your prompt.


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nice take on the prompt . . congrats on the gold !!


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really great rhyme and flow. Congrats on the gold and thanks for sharing it in the group.
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Thank you for your comment.
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Brilliant!!!
I love this piece, it's just so stunning. Best of luck in this contest, you have a winner here!!! Peace, Cyn


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