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Strong

I've got to be
strong
and put it all
on the line
Can't show any
weakness
or back down
this time.
Say it's all,
or nothing at all,
all the way,
or no way at all.
Can't stumble,
can't falter,
Can't let
myself fall.
Can't let you
sidetrack me,
Can't let you
disarm me,
Sweep me off
my feet,
Sweet talk me,
and charm me.
I've got to be
strong,
and believe
what they say,
That if you
truly love me,
Wild horses, won't
drag you away.

Author notes

Option one How this song "Wild Horses" makes me feel.

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  • maralisa gold member
    June 12

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    I've got to be
    strong
    and put it all
    on the line
    Can't show any
    weakness
    or back down
    this time.
    I've got to be
    strong,
    and believe
    what they say,
    That if you
    truly love me,
    Wild horses, won't
    drag you away.wonderful we all have to be strong congratulations on your shiny and thank you for sharing your poem with the group


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 12
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    Liked the flow of these lines, the brevity and the gold you received for writing this. Way to go.

  • Hetha gold member
    June 11

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    Wow! I love this! Congrats on getting the well deserved Gold! You did extremely well with your prompt.

  • carole21
    June 11
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    nice take on the prompt . . congrats on the gold !!


  • Autumn-Rain gold member
    June 10
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    really great rhyme and flow. Congrats on the gold and thanks for sharing it in the group.
  • Brilliant!!!

    I love this piece, it's just so stunning. Best of luck in this contest, you have a winner here!!! Peace, Cyn

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