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A Place Called Hell.

A pristine soul

Once clean and pure,

The goodness ripped out,

The light is no more,

His maniacal laugh

Echoes through night,

His senseless fury

At all that is right,

Demented demons

Rampage through his mind,

He whispers the words

That Satan designed,

A tormented soul

So twisted and black,

Screams in the darkness

As he starts to attack,

The rancid stench

Of death all around,

A corpse decomposing,

All sanity unwound,

Depravity rules

Destruction his goal,

Malevolent actions

Of a tortuous soul,

Pestilence, plague

He does them so well,

Then viciously takes you

To the place we call Hell.

Author notes

 

 All words used in this order -

 

pristine
maniacal
senseless
demented
whispers
twisted
screams
rancid
decomposing
torturous

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  • WICKED

    This is truly an amazing poem, one of the best about Lucifier I have ever read! magnificant work with rhyming the powerful and intense terms that are in also perfect context. I LOVE THIS. BRILLIANT

    ~Emily~ xx


  • Iloveugh
    June 22

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    Wow very interesting i like it alot its very very well written and worded so greatly. And plus you made the point that you were trying to make. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly
  • too many peole turn out this way from going through such terrible things and not being show the right effections.
  • lovely!
    the gist behind this was really good, but the constant use of the comma put me off quite a bit. Your rhyming was superb and it flowed exceptionally!
    thank you for your entry