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Paths of life

Life can have its ups
life can have its downs.

Life can bring a smile
life can bring a frown.
Natures life has seasons
our life has reasons.
Life can bring pools of tears
life wash up unwanted fears.
Life can have a sour taste
life can be a fast paste.

 

 

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 30, 2008

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    very well written and

    very simply penned in your usual style of brevity and I like the message written into this poem you have written a very up beat piece here.


  • CatherineL
    May 20, 2008

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    simple, but effective. I don't usually go for short poems but i like this! thank you for entering and good luck!


  • BeautifulFlame
    May 20, 2008
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    Very Good!

    This was very sincere, Keep penning your words in simplicity speak volumes.

    Hugs
    ~Lisa~