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Aphrodite

With a seductive smile and a glint in her eye
She takes your hand, takes you by surprise
You don’t question her motives as she drags you away
But you know in your heart that she’ll have her way

She’s stripping down to nothing
She’s dancing for you now
She’s a goddess when she’s loving
And she’s going to show you how

Are you going to let her take you?
Let her play her little game?
Are you going to let her break you?
Let her ride you till you’re insane?

She kisses your neck, her lips slide down your chest
You know that you should but she won’t let you rest
You writhe and you moan as she rides you harder
Who needs air when you’ve got love like hers?

She’s stripping down to nothing
Dance is over, take a bow
She’s a devil when she’s loving
And she has to have you now

Are you going to let her take you?
Let her play her little game?
Are you going to let her break you?
Let her ride you till you’re insane?

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 18, 2008

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    I found this to be quite sensual and tantalizing
    Nicely done
    Thank you for sharing and for being part of this contest


  • Angelflower
    July 30, 2008

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    I really liked this.. you did a wonderful job.. The imagery and the flow was really wonderful.. it was intense in a sensual way You did a wonderful job.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..


    Angel


  • Unconscious-Energy
    June 28, 2008
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    She's the devil when she's loving fantastic well penned.


  • SuicidalLover
    May 20, 2008

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    Oh damn! This is darkly enticing! I love it. I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel