His eyes are black and his skin is cold
Dark long hair, but beautiful to behold
Around his neck, he wears the star
Where's he from..? from afar...
Eli screams the Devil shoots from his veins
Eli talks the truth about what is to come
Eli gives his heart, though his heart is flames
Daemon Angel, I'm glad you came
Daemon Angel, I'm glad you came...
Blackened tears run down his face
For emotions deep he can't erase
Around his finger, he wears Archangel ring
What does your Archangel bring?
Eli cries and the world quakes at his voice
Eli roars and the Earth responds from deep within
Eli gives his soul.. though his soul is stone
Daemon Angel, I'm glad you came
Daemon Angel... of ancient fame...
Dark shadow wings appear from his body
And enclose around him like a protective sheild
Then he extends them and takes flight into the distance
He takes me there with him...
Eli weeps the tears of a million broken suns
Eli crawls upon the Earth surface like that..
Eli, the great reptile the serpent of stone
Daemon Angel, never dies
Daemon Angel, never dies
Please tell me what you think
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This does not follow the contest rules. spaces do not count as lines, only lines with wording on them count.
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i really like the thoughts you have put into this poem, my husband's name is eli thats why i clicked i wanted to see what this poem was about, i like the detials and the emotions you have used and the flow is nice tooo, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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Hey thanks.. your hubby is called Eli? Lovely name isn't it? The poem is called Eli because its the name of my..er.. Guardian Angel..so to speak.. Thanks for your comment.
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