Here is
my book of dreams.
All my hopes
stand firmly rooted,
woven through each page;
this tapestry of
my sincerity.
As each new page
of life dawns,
my needs flutter softly
and whisper to your soul.
Not yet complete,
the final page awaits
my union
with destiny.
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE/IMAGE PROMPT by imahealer.
675 points, ended May 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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“ Here is
my book of dreams. Not yet complete,
the final page awaits
my union
with destiny”
You are closer to what comes last than most.
Write strong till the end. Indelible.
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Liked all of this but I particularly like the last stanza. Let us hope there is quite a few more pages to be filled yet before the last entry is made. Thanks for another enjoyable read.
Juls 
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Really enjoyed reading your poem. The poem and picture compliment each other--you did a fantastic job writing this one! Good luck in the contest!
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What a wonderful interpretation of this image. Your first stanza is outstanding as an opening to the next two. The final stanza, ( a wonderful metaphor) is what all await. Though left unsaid, I interpreted our destiny as death. Many can pole vault from your wonderful words to any thoughts that might enter after reading. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Best wishes!
Shana -
This is truly beautiful. I wish you the best of luck in this contest
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That's such a wonderful write for this pic! Love the ending of the first stanza! And then the ending just finishes it perfect... not yet complete... I hope to find that union myself!
Fantastic write!
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