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God Is Our Stronghold.

Love is patient, Love is kind,
mankind in his heart is blind.
Jesus came to set mankind free
and paid with his life at Calvary.

Gods Greatest Love came from heaven above
Jesus gave his life showing Loyal Love
To protect us from death and pain,
so everlasting life can be ours again.

Under his Almighty protective hand,
God will take us into the promised land.
No need to tremble, nor shake with fear
God our God, is always near

Showing mankind Agape Love
hearts and mind protected, by God above
he is with us through every task
all we need to do is pray and ask.

God gave his best, he gave his all
to protect us from Adams fall
Jesus suffered he prayed all night
walk in the protection of his blessed light.

God is patient, God is kind,
Jesus gave his life for mankind.
God our God is always near
in him we trust we will not fear.

He is with us in our dakest hour,
on our behalf he'll show his Power
Our stronghold in whom we trust,
Our Loving God True and Just.









Author notes

A contest entry but more important an oppurtunity to praise God and his Beloved Son Jesus Christ.

Agape Love.
Means: Loving The Unlovable.

Romans 5:8-10
God reccommends his own love to us in that while we were yet sinners Christ died for us...For if when we were enemies, we became reconciled to God through the death of his Son, much more, now that we have become reconciled, we shall be saved by his life.

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  • SadCatLover
    June 12

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    Thi is such a beautiful poem. So full of truth. It says in the bible, "God is love." I totally believe that. This brought a smile to my face. I enjoyed the read!
  • I was so sorry to read about your daughter, I lost my gran to cancer when I was 12, but I could not begin to imagine the pain of loosing a child.
    Reading your poetry I feel like I've recieved a sign as daft as it may sound to some people.
    See, when I was little my gran (she was a Jehovah's Witness) used to study with me and taught me alot. I've always known the bible to be true but when she died I lost my faith in Jehovah, I'm ashamed by it but for a few weeks I blamed Him for taking her. I've never really got back to studying properly or going to the meetings as much as I know time is running out. I guess what I'm trying to say is by reading about your daughter and now reading how strong your faith in Jehovah still is I see how I can be.
    I just wanted to say thank you and what an amazing poem.
    Elizabeth
    x

    • Lady Mak
      June 6
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      Teenage Tears

      Hallo little love,
      What a kind and lovely comment you left for me. You said "Reading my poetry you felt like you'd received a sign as daft as it may sound to some people."

      "See when I was little my gran (she was a Jehovah's Witness) used to study with me and taught me a lot."

      This really is quite amazing, you see I am one of Jehovah's Witnesses as well, I have been a witness for 24 years now.. Would you like me to be your AP Nan. And you can message me and talk whenever you like.

      I can encourage you and you will have an AP Nan here on Allpoetry when you need me. I know your Gran would be happy that I was looking out for you, and I know she would do the same for me.
      Huggggs xxx


  • this is really wonderful!! amen.

  • amen...this is just a piece to accept HIS wonders and the blessings..my thanks for such a warm and amazing expression here..
    • Lady Mak
      May 25
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      PrabhuDayal Khattar

      Thank you for your kind comment, it is always a great honour to praise God and his Beloved Son. In God we trust he is our stronghold a refuge in times of distress, he will never leave us or forsake us.

  • Talloaks silver member
    May 20
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    Excellent and very well written. Best to you in the contest sister.

    • Lady Mak
      May 21
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      Talloaks

      Thank you for your encouraging comment, an excellent opputunity to praise our God and his Beloved Son.
  • Puppydog silver member
    May 20

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    BEAUTIFULLY INSPIRATIONAL!!!

    Sadly though as you love almost always along with it comes sorrow and pain. Strength of heart helps one to keep on loving and helping.

    • Lady Mak
      May 21
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      Pure heart

      Hallo my friend dear Pure heart, in the kind of love we have for God,... God promises us , that he will do away with all sadness and pain as it reads at Revelation 21:4

      "And he (God) will wipe out every tear from their eyes, and death will be no more, neither will mourning, nor outcry, nor pain be anymore. The former things have passed away."

  • Capt Jed
    May 20

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    AMEN!

    Not only was it written so well with meticulous rhyming, and the gentle flow, it could also be a sermon. I like the way you speak to the reader and the message that each verse portrays. Yet another great work that touches my heart. Thanks!
    Blessings,
    Ron (Capt Jed )

    • Lady Mak
      May 21
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      Capt Jed

      Hallo Ron, thank you for taking the time to read my poem. The message I speak to the reader is a message taken from the Bible.

      It is Gods words that has touched your heart and I have had the privellege and honour to put these words treasured in my heart from the scriptures into verse and share them with you.

      Thank you for taking the time to read and also leave a sincere encouraging comment. Thank you and may Gods love shine on you for the love you show for God and his Beloved Son.
  • Awesome write. Beautiful.

    And along with the verses in Romans a nice thought in Matthew 9:10-13 tells of Jesus "while he was reclining at the table in the house, look! many tax collectors and sinners came and began reclining with Jesus and his disciples. But on seeing this the Pharisees began to say to his disciples: “Why is it that YOUR teacher eats with tax collectors and sinners?” Hearing [them], he said: “Persons in health do not need a physician, but the ailing do. Go, then, and learn what this means, ‘I want mercy, and not sacrifice.’ For I came to call, not righteous people, but sinners."

    We are truly cared for.
    • Lady Mak
      May 21
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      J. M. Spencer

      Thank you Matthew for taking the time to leave an encouraging scripture that shows that Jesus's was there for all who came to him to learn about his Beloved Father God.

      Jesus further spoke by means of the fine illustration of a physician and people who were ailing.

      Jesus the Greatest Teacher who ever walked earth has left us a perfect model for us to follow in his footsteps.

      Thankyou for sharing Gods word with me, and thankyou for your kind comment on my poetic write to bring praise to God and his Beloved Son.

      Thankyou, I am glad you liked it.
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