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My 1st Love

Have you ever had a 1st love
Someone that cared so much about you
Someone that said that I'll be there for til the end of time
I have and it was wonderful
When he held me in his arms
When he kissed me, I melted
When he told me that he loved me, I felt special
But soon it all ended over a phone call
I thought my life would end forever
Maybe one he'll come back to me

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I just starting writing about my ex-boyfriend and I felt all these things about him.

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  • kkharris13
    May 20
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    Ok, I guess

    I just starting writing because I had nothing else to do.