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The Festivities

After far long I make it to your door
humble and still I knock
I knock again several time more

I hold my breath to the screatching sound
the door reveals the heart of your home
slowly I enter the astonishing grounds

Without hesitation I move to only you
peoples whispers fill the hall
never the less my eyes stay true

Majesticly you sit tall and proud
I stop three steps from your feet
kneeling a hush is heard from the crowd

My gift I present on your joyous occasion
a stranger of honor and friendship
I make just a simple persuasion

Blow out your candles my lord and make a wish
I hope your days are forever bliss.

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY BLACKNIGHT!

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  • Simply Simple
    May 20, 2008

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    What a loverly tribute. Excellent work. I'm sure BlackKnight will appreciate this one. Thanks for entering.