To all appearances a simplton.
Yet can write such seductive, scinitlating solliques.
Just watch and be wary,
for your preconceptions be damned,
the tower of truth over shadows you.
Keep your superiority,
let it overwhelm and underscore
your relationship to the hidden realisation.
The being you belittle,
could hold your inhereitence,
to greater knowledge.
The more you dredge,
the greater your sufferage.
Expanding to the realisatoin,
that this is less a sensation,
than it is a epiphany.
The more you interreact,
the more you extract.
Building to the climatic conclusion,
your fellow human bears little resemblance,
to the preconcepted existance your mind created.
Relate this to the the distance it takes for you to understand,
the thoughts sifting through your hands,
from the one you stilted and silenced.
Till the wave washes over your consciousness,
a cooling realisation.
Yet another way of coming to the conclusion,
this life has more than one way of living.
A contest entry
- It says 300 points... but that all depends on you by Lady Patricia.
1100 points, ended May 22, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes. by XXxXBassMeisterxXxX.
306 points, ended June 1, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great write. I like the imiagery used. Nice job
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this was a very great poem i think you did a great job excellent job on this and best of wishes to you in the contest
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thanks for the encouragement. When writing I tend to just think of myself, its nice to know others can read it and enjoy it.
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