its four in the morning,
and me and you are awake.
you
break
the dawn,
hiding the full moon
behind the sky,
shadows move in the dark
making it hard
to breathe -
but you save me;
four in the morning,
me and you the only ones awake
im staring in your eyes
and im blinded
by the shadows
on your face.
Author notes
you make me OMG
A contest entry
- just enter. by Trinsa.
420 points, ended June 7, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
