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blinded

its four in the morning,
and me and you are awake.
you
break
the dawn,
hiding the full moon
behind the sky,
shadows move in the dark
making it hard
to breathe -
but you save me;

four in the morning,
me and you the only ones awake

im staring in your eyes

and im blinded
      by the shadows
on your face.

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you make me OMG

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