In life’s parade now marches all,
Triumphant bugles in yellow call
As gladly does the chorus ring,
Death to winter! welcome spring.
Dancing in the new dawns light,
White daisies sway in pure delight,
Joined by the buttercups that tell
In joyful union 'all is well'
Author notes
I know that this is late for a spring poem, but it sorta worked out that way
In a list
A contest entry
- I Think I'm Back Now by pattyann4500.
1000 points, ended May 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW this is truly a smashing piece of writing so uplifting and positive. I love the way you have brought the flow of rhyming into the poem it makes it fantastic. I really enjoyed reading this.
Take care
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I'm glad to read a spring poem now that the forecasters are telling us about the first flakes of snow! Unavoidably, this reminds me of "The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe," and the coming of spring in that story, especially the flowers.
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Thinking of Spring in the middle of Fall, when all the leaves have fallen off the trees makes me think about the cycle of life and how things will return again.. and again.. and again. You've brought back such wonderfully sweet memories of a season not-so-long-ago with your poem. Thank you. Keep writing
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Ah..the scenario is wonderful and the immages are beautiful as well....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it..
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I love it. It is such a joyous, uplifting write.
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I do love flowers, especially daisies and buttercups. Thank you so much for this delightful and upbeat rhyming poem. Such a pleasure to read. Patricia
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