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Left Alone In Despair

Render me useless, render me there.
Ponder all sadness left in despair.
Find me desolate and alone without care for the world around me.
Lifes just not fair.

Let your happiness deter you from seeking me.
Rapt, I am, in misery.
Subsist on better times, I do, while I sit here alone and wait for you.
While I sit here alone.

Confused by hope, confused I stare.
Lost in sadness left in despair.
Past times of my mind begin to tear and burn in me.
Exhaled around me.
The pains not fair.

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  • Condemd RyeZing
    June 2, 2008
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    Nice job. Very deep. Loved the last stanza.