Three Detention's I now see
The Ocean like the distant Sea
While this beautiful Woman devoted
Reaches her hand out shows her love to thee
Grabbing a hold not losing him to the Sea once again
The Sky so beautiful Pink, Blue, White and Gray
Like true love never leaves nor Dies
Instead you can see love fright's together to the very end
Trying to Escape while their Heart's palpitate
As they await their final Destiny and Fate
Written By: Brenda Gae Harper
May 20, 2008
Author notes
Photo credit to be given to Deviantart-Below the rust.
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie PIF Pic Prompt; come see! by perfectsunset.
675 points, ended May 28, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you feel where the love is in this poem?
Comments
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Nice poem, good imagery paints a rich picture.
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Aww this was such a beautiful write, and original take on the prompt. You have penned lovely imagery and deep emotion, all together~ a masterpiece. Thank you so much for your wonderful write & best of luck
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I am absolutely in awe of your metaphors here. And your wording, too! It's amazing. This is a beautiful piece. Complex and intricate, bold and straightforward. Keep up the great work. You penned a wonderful piece here.
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