eyes stare
star lit night
in wonder
one star
brightens earth
shield look
seven colors
dew reflects high
look elegant
Author notes
haiku
A contest entry
- Haiku, Senryu and Pixiku by Samplette.
1000 points, ended May 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A well written chain of haiku. I think you did a very good job with them. Thank you for entering my contest.
Sam
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It's a nice write but I'm still confused about haiku and senryu. Pixiku -- well, that's a new one on me.
Good luck with it.
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This is very well done...Nice 'kus...Love watching the night sky myself...
All the best...
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my brother..they arent a traditional haiku...but they are beutiful
...many nowadays dont stick to the tradition of a haikiu, that saddens me...but how could your beautiful words not touch me, either
Cindy
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Venugopal
Beautiful done nice chain haiku good luck with it
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I know nothing about 'forms' except how to spell it...lol....so, for me, this is impressive. Very lovely feel and wording to this.
best wishes in your contest.
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This is such a lovely write about the sky. you have written this so wonderfully, it was such a pleasure to read.
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