When she looks my way I turn to water
She's like cocaine in my soul
I can't get enough to keep me high
No matter how hard I want to try
I'm in this groove to the day I die
What I need I'll bleed for anything
Like a scrap tossed to a mongrel dog
she can whip me into a frenzy with just one look
And then burn me to a crisp with her body heat
She's everything I need and to please
She's my own pandemic and personal disease
So burn me up and use me up
I don't care how I die
Just burn me up and use me up
I'll be glad to cook and fry
What I need I'll bleed for anything
Like a scrap tossed to a mongrel dog
she can whip me into a frenzy with just one look
And then burn me to a crisp with her body heat
She's everything I need and to please
She's my own pandemic and personal disease
So burn me up and use me up
I don't care how I die
Just burn me up and use me up
I'll be glad to cook and fry
So burn me up and use me up
I don't care how I die
Just burn me up and use me up
I'll be glad to cook and fry...
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Entertain me [freeverse] ♥ by whiterabbit..
330 points, ended June 29, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pick a song! by AutumnsFlame.
1626 points, ended June 4, 2008, 26 entries
Gold trophy winner
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I'm so
Comments
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EXCELLENT! Everything was amazing about this poem! Best contest entry I've read yet! Your rhyme was awesome and I like the whole concept and how you used metaphors to describe this girl. Thank you for entering my contest!

