Lips meet softly
continuing the silence between us.
Heated pecks, each extending
No more space between us
Removed from the mind, blown out of this world
Hurled into space, hold and embrace
Leaving the world behind, its our time to shine
Souls collide with smiles streched wide
Expanding the universe
creating our own star
that by far
outshines the sun, spun hotter than its rays
Our bodies blaze
Deepening until
tongues enter-twining
a solar flare, the glare
blinds us of the stress
Softly carress, lips part
as eyes meet.
"I love you" they say
Before our lips rejoin and continue to play
So even when we part ways we can still feel the taste
That lives on our lips so much
The longing builds untill the next time they touch
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I don't know this style sucks to me lol, I'm just playin just tawt I'd be different. but yea it is a different style from what you usually use, but other than that, I don't tink I read part one if this is 2. But other than that, keep posting yo.
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I like this new style, it seems more passionate. Great write.
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me likey!! its not ur usual style of writing but i think this kind adds more of a sensual tone to it...nice job
*mwah*
LUV U BABI!
♥KAILA♥
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