I asked nicely
“in the mood to submit?”
Cheeky lips rose to smile
as you winked.
Heated
waiting;
bound to our table,
desire, our fire;
you for the taking.
Author notes
omg i had fun with this one hehehehe
In a list
A contest entry
- Adult Pic Contest... PIF... yep, my second!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very hot and dripping with sensuality in so short a write. Much talent behind this piece. grats on the HM!!
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hehehe Thank you Dan
Cin
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If you didn't have fun with this
something's wrong
it must have set off your mind eh? -
Sorry, forget this
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Oh, so much sensually erotic. Congrats for HM.
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Thank you
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one word: wow
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just when I thought I'd seen it all... OMG very hot. Contgrats on the HM
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heheh oh no you havent seen it all..i have many naughty writes hiding away in my collection lol
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Ooooh so hot and steamy!! The guy on the table is HOT! haha - Very nice job on the prompt Congrats on the cup
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hehe..I so dont want crush ur fantasy..but its a girl lol
but i thought it was a guy first too hehehehehe
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Oh WOW! Teehee
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I love lustful girls...
you seem to be utterly lustful....
A brilliant write...
Entertaining...
Some might be turned on...
Kisses...all over!
Galaxy2
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lol, aww thank you..A fan of my erotic poems, never hurts
Cindy
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Disturbing
I've never really got this sort of thing. But, whatever blows your skirt up. Congrats. ~Peace~Gar -
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I dont think you need to go as far as to say disturbing.
Just because I let a picture inspire my imagination doesnt mean this is an everyday thing for me etc...
but thank you
Cindy
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This was delightful to read.
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Thank you, it was delightful to write hehe
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Now isn't poetry fun?
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oh fun and so much more
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lol sister
-hides eyes-
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hehehehe
lov u too
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sure looks like you had fun! I wonder who provoked these words from your pen. Juls
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hmm yes I wonder
lol
Thanx darl
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Really good at writing this poem..In a mood submit, what a sweet feeling..he..he
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Thnak you my brother
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Hehe this was HOTT!!! I can see how you had fun with this one.. sensual thoughts & woah imagery! Excellent sis!! one steamy writeee.. good luck in the contest
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heheh thanx SiS, I did mush so enjoy writing it
hehehehe
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"You for the taking"... yipeee... A cheeky and seductive wee write that got me heated!! Lusty!
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hehehe yay, gotat get the judge heated
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eep! Consensual with the sensual ... I love your take on this ... Cheeky lips! weeeeeeee!
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cheeky lips indeed hehehehehehe
Thank you
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Should I be reading these words from my sweet daughter?
Hell yeah!!! You did so brilliantly with the picture sweetheart. Poor Matt when he gets home from work...actually, lucky Matt if you're still in that mood
Best of luck in the contest precious.
Love Mum 
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hehehe
Oh i reckon I will be lol
thanks mum, love U
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Ooh la la
This conjures some serious imagery of bound romance and exotic endevours
Great write!
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Thanks thats what I was going for hehe
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Oh now it reads like that tongue salivating at the thought of it lol Love, C
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yay exactly what I wanted hehehe
Thanks darl
Cin
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this is just outstanding
best to you in this contest
Riftkin
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Thank you
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Good luck.
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Thanks Mark...I need to lighten the day
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Lighten it or lusten it LOLOLOLOLOL
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oh i think i definetly did lusten lol
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