in the blink of an eye
fear washes away with
the ebbing tide
...and you
Author notes
15 words
Prompt: Picture used as border
Picture Credit: Photobucket
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words Once More - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold VIII - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended May 29, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Time Heals
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I instantly got the word: pudding for some reason~ but also wild as it sounds...word: Medusa and actually seeing Medusa-
also getting this feeling of anger- reference hearing word: spouse now this is just what I am being shown
wild as it sounds...reference to garbage- like something about the garbage- then jumps from that to vacation- what sounds like honeymoon~
whether place for second honeymoon
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
in the blink of an eye
Magnificent Voice spoken (Message)~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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You could not have said it any better. NICE WORK!!
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very true this poem margaret.. good luck in the contest..xxx
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So much said in so few words sis Well penned. Sorry I've been so slack at commenting lately.
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Very well written, very descriptive in so few words. My best wishes in contest.
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gosh 15 words, not easy but wow you pulled it off, you spoke such a thought in your words here mum
Hope you do well in the contest
Cin
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yes time heals all eventually , leaving a few scars xx good luck xx
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Very dreamy.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you Mark
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*sigh* Very powerful Margaret, and best of luck in the contest dear.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Thank you
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