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Nate The Great

My trusty partner in shenanigans
Together we create worlds of our own
Turning boredom into freedom
Laughter is our playground

Time has no relativity
Friendship has no age limit
Hatred holds no ground
This space we have;
is loves kingdom

When tensions grow tight
Our bond grows tighter
when tempers begin to rise
our friendship learns to fly

My bloodless brother
Be strong when your will;
screams of weakness

May your search to find who you are
and where you belong;
take you to happiness

May your civil war within your heart
conclude
and reveal what you dream to be true

No matter where life takes you
no matter what life makes you
Keep in mind sometimes satisfaction
hides within our own criticism
do you strive for perfection or satisfaction?

Perfection is overrated

In our eyes you will always be
Nate The Great

Good luck in basics bro




P.S You will also always be Narutii Nate

Author notes

Going away poem to my best friend nate.

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  • xhellovee
    May 27
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    Fantastic :]
    You're very talented!

  • SpydurPoet silver member
    May 26

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    Still an amazing writer. I am gone for a month, I come back, and your writing has advanced a whole year's worth. You'll always be one of the most talented writers in my eyes.

  • Hey Jess! I think he's into the ether again!
    What have you done with Brant is what I want to know!
    Let him swear that he wrote this great poem! Come on, bring him out here!

    I know when I'm being bamboozled!

    Did I say I liked it very much? I did? OK!

    (Shoot, I wish I had written that!)


  • penman gold member
    May 19

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    Excellent

    What a touching and thoughtful poem of dedication to your friends. Your words convey their essence of true friendship. Thank you for sharing.


  • markgrif gold member
    May 19

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    He going to boot camp?

    Well he goes away surely knowing he has a friend no matter what happens to him.

    Well Writ.


    • bones7
      May 19
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      Yes he is.
      Yeah I guess.lol
      If I let him see itnot sure tho.lol
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