Deeper and deeper I fall
In this well, but in the end
It turns out to be hell
When I think its over,
I am derailed my hearts the
One that will never prevail
Knowing fact from fiction
That is a must, but knowledge
Of the truth that’s a lust
Lies are flowing round like a
Mighty twister, now I fade
Away like a blister
Author notes
Evanescence- Going Under
A contest entry
- Pick a song! by AutumnsFlame.
1626 points, ended June 4, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Favorites (Invite Only) by Lj-.
600 points, ended August 29, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope this isn't horribly bad, is it?
Comments
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Nice poem.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck!
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I actually enjoyed this. It wasn't bad. I like the hint of rhyme and your choice of words. Nice work! Thank you for entering my contest.
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your choice oof words is very very wonderful in htis poem. it was a great poem of expression.
great job!!!
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thank you for your kind words. that means a lot to me!
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