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Before I Met You

Before I Met You

Before i met you, i was the one who never dreamed
Before i met you, i was the one who never smiled
Before i met you, i was the one who was always down
Before i met you, i had nothing to brace myself on
Before i met you, i was the nothing i had become
Now that I met you, i lie awake wondering where you are
Now that i met you, i look at the moon hoping your looking to
Now that i met you, i brace myself on you
Now that i met you, you've saved me from my worst enemy, myself....
Before i met you...i had no love
Now that I met you....i dont know how i lived without you for so long

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Written December 14th, 2003

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  • smileywinks
    December 23, 2003
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    this is sweet!

    I am glad you musta got saved? I am guessing this anyways!
    Some don't believe in Jesus, and God!
    It's not my place to say their wrong, but only to let them know, I care deeply, and this is so!
    Thankyou for sharing I enjoyed reading this write!
    Good luck to you in my first contest!
    And Happy holidays to you and yours
    XOXO Veronica