I don't have a road, to travel...
I've a desert in front
of me, and I shall cross it.
And if there's a mountain
beyond that, I shall climb it.
If there's still a sea
beyond that, I shall swim it.
If there's anything afterward,
I hope, I'm not already dead.
Mayank Pahwa.
Author notes
Have fun while you're at it, "Life" that is!
Mayank.
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Ohhh(
) How philosophical and Cytoplasmic write...
If we don't have a road to travel..we better make a road..lol..
Thoughtful poem here about life..with all those risky things we all hope that we won't die..
this was a pretty wonderful write
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i didnt get a chance to comment on this when I read it on yahoo but i shall do it now
i like the way that its concise and even these few words send across a clear and very important message.Im glad you are finally being optimistic o 'tiny whiny li'l wonder'*stealing words*
I think everyone can learn something good by reading this poem..and it's certainly a poem everyone can..or should relate with.
Anyway, hope you cross all the hurdles that come in your life with the same spirit you had while writing this poem
Best-est-esttt of luck for the 9th of June( i know you'll do well)
:-*
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Awesome author note that followed wonderful poetry. It describes a hard life, crossing deserts and climbing mountains, but the narrator never gives up. I would've been disappointed if he did
. It's nice to see poems with hope. Even at the end, they didn't want to be dead, so they could face whatever was beyond 
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
Uncle Mayank Fan,
John Jacob Jingle Heimer Schmit
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i liked the ending...
I hope i am not already dead...
I dunno it just seemed funny to me
. This was a great write though... Talking about how you will get through life and over the obsticles in you way. Great write.
. Rewarded 4
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well, the ending was a very creative one at that. it was very good!
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