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If you were mine

If You Were Mine

If I saw a shooting star
I would wish for you
If I could have any dream
It would be of you
If you were mine
I would hold you tight
I would say
I love you a billion times
and hug you a trillion
If you were only mine
I would be happy forever
I would cry no more
I would want no more
I would be satisfied all my days
If you were only mine

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Written November 21st, 2003

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  • smileywinks
    December 23, 2003
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    this was a good write too! And may God bless you!
    Many Xmas wishes for you this yr! And in the 2004 many wishes I hope come to you!
    Good luck, and thankx for entering dear!
    XOXO Veronica {I haven't much coffee in me yet LOL }