Another disappointment.
Another lie to live by.
I wont be the one to stand in your way.
You said I was special,
I did not believe your eyes.
But then- you told me with your heart.
What does that prove?
How do you feel now?
Drowning in the waves of fear.
Just run- run far from me.
Then it wont be real- what we shared.
We'll both just pretend it was me.
Author notes
"you're gone" by something corporate
i hope this doesn't "suck ass"
Lotus-Mama
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A contest entry
- just enter. by Trinsa.
420 points, ended June 7, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The perfect response to "just enter!"
I always like the grit of your writes... your admirable strength is evident.
I liked the 1st and last stanzas, expresses your exasperation best.
Very cool entry.
Marlene -
Beautiful job on this Lotus Mama. Quite an emotional work. Thanks for the read!
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this poem made me teary-eyed. very strong words and overflowing with emotion. its a very sad but beautiful write. good luck and great job not "sucking ass" lol....as if that was ever the case
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Tis beautiful Auntie! I loved it.
lveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee you
mylee -
This does not. I think you have written some of your best recently. This is one of them. Very well done. Good luck on the contest.
Garrison
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no it doesn't suck ass =]
thanks for the entry...
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