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Surfing

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She strolls ever farther

into the soothing swells,

her legs caressed by foamy silky fingers

that creates a cerebral canvas of erotic visions,

stirring a Tsunami in serenity's silky sensations,

which seeped into every cranny of her concerns.

 

Mind immersed in warm flow of desires,

floating upon memory's tangential tide

as soul turns into cerulean sail of tranquility's lace,

drowning every care and fear upon peace's waters.

 

Heart feels the call of passion's mermaid

to submerse herself in ecstasy's deepest oceans,

infatuation's fins taking her beyond reality's shore.

 

Moving her body subtly and seductively

within the shell of her bath tub sea,

bubble bath surface

washing with afternoon's stream of expectations,

over when her lover lifeguard

comes home

to take them both for ride

upon intimacy's surfboard.

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  • MysticalRayne
    May 23, 2008

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    What can I say ~ you took my breathe away with this piece beautifully done ~ best of luck in the contest


  • Ithica silver member
    May 21, 2008
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    You have the most vivid and imaginative verses. Always an impressive vision of a given prompt!!!


  • Desire gold member
    May 20, 2008
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    Holy Moly~

    Wonderful weaving of words You have penned based on the picture prompt~
    Magnificent images to tempt the senses
    Another one to Love
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


  • Ravensdark
    May 20, 2008

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    The imagery is great, I found the whole metaphor of surfing and intimacy exceedingly interesting. Show's you have imagination and are not afraid to use it. I also liked the subtle consanence and how it helps it all flow.Great poem and best of luck in the contest.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    Beautifully versed with your masterful and extensive command of the English Language! Your vocabulary is as extensive as your creativity!
    Well done & best of luck in the contest!

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