Tonight, I stand on my hilltop
under Artemis' watchful moon,
poised and ready for what may come
Attack with such ferocity, rip, tear, shred away
like beasts from Hell
do not falter, do not fall,
do not lay down your weapons
Send in your gods, let them attack
let their fury, their rage, their hatred loose
And let them all meet my sword
Author notes
Anyone who stands for what they beleive in, whether it be love, trust, and idea, etc, is a hero in my eyes
A contest entry
- PIF QuickieTime-10/10/30 by Riftkin.
625 points, ended May 22, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - on the dark side ... prewrites ok by b497.
300 points, ended June 25, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A heroic act or maybe words,nicely written...
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amazing this is more of what is in a hero but still heroish!!!
I like this alot
thank you for entering much love
--kat -
vivid and strong
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ooooh i love this
it marches forward all the way to the end with a great rhythm
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good, good, good..tone, metaphor, no wasted words or bad cliche. Thank you for entering.
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Wow this is a really strong piece...the last line is great! well deserved gold!!!
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this is awesome... a wonderful read..
thank you for entering my contest..
for otherwise I would not have
been able to read this..
Riftkin
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wow..I loved this. I always wanted to do that..the whole "Once more unto the breech dear friends" speech.
Great write
Simon
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Wow! This is bold, powerful, and intense. Bring it on! Im me! Hear my roar!
Awesome!!! I commend you!
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