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Sky and I

You see... the sky and I fought death back in the 1980's,
the sky and I, we brought down countless desert despots,
deposing regimes like rust in graveyards, seeking one last busted
down tail-light for justice.

Sky and I were inseparable, flying steam-wise,
through clouds, as if combustion were obsolete.

So, what do you think?

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  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Very nice... Very interesting poem you have penned here... Very good -- I like the inner thoughts hehehe... Enjoyed


  • calendar girl
    May 20, 2008
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    cool dude.
    apes must've penetrated your inner creative being.


  • purpledragonfly
    May 20, 2008
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    I just love the rust in graveyards line --- : )