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i think this is by far the best work i have done on AP, clearly the most expressive...and I have Emotiku to thank for this break through...
A contest entry
- emotiku by Yemassee.
537 points, ended May 23, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so wonderful!..What a great surprise! My favorite part is line 2...I can relate!
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You created yet a new form...Beatiku! It's like Ginsberg married Basho...well, his sister anyway.
*howl* hopefully that is the wolf one. Howlingly good. 
You even used emoticons for the title!
I am honored, and surprised (like whats HernameGoes said) See all you serious poets out there...it is ok to be silly! My evil plan is working...to pave the way for StIcKy CaPs to become accepted on AP as real poetry. This is just the first step! 
Thanks for entering, I mean indulging my insanity, lol.
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the honor is mine...good to be around people who know how to have fun... i'd heard a rumor there were a few of you still left on AP......PK
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he feels desperate
then prays for an idea to make things work
waited but idea didn't come.
the banging on the wall made he go crazy
and he started to dance on the streets
and everyone thought that is was
Ah, didn't think you really would give this one a try. Am glad to see you step out of 'routine'. Having fun is healthy, keeps our BP normal
v^
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ahh BP should be normal but writing does not need to be...so this is good, fun contests...thanks for the idea...
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WOW!!!!! ...by far your best work...breathtaking ...stunning...gorgeous poetry here PK....very publishable
lol..this is cute it definately tells a little story about reminders & memory fun stuff...I might have a go at this contest...
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you ought to enter...we need to support the emerging art of Emotiku...this could replace that guy with the dog...PK
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and who is this guy and his dog, anyways?
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some guy wrote about a dog...and put it up for comment about ten thousand times... people were up in arms...revolting poets!
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lmao - I know of that poem
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lol
I will see what I can do...thinking of a metaphor right now..lol
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Listen! "Do it, Do it, Do it!"
That is your muse trapped inside your head telling you to enter!
Now listen to it this time, but if it starts telling you to go out and start shooting people, well, you might want a second opinion before doing that one.
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thanks lol.
...and I'm exploring some concepts at the moment
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I guess the site isn't working well. This is an unusual contest, but. Good luck to you. I like this.
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You can enter...you want to...I see it in your words!
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