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i think this is by far the best work i have done on AP, clearly the most expressive...and I have Emotiku to thank for this break through...

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  • NeonRose silver member
    June 3
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    This is so wonderful!..What a great surprise! My favorite part is line 2...I can relate!


  • Yemassee silver member
    May 20

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    You created yet a new form...Beatiku! It's like Ginsberg married Basho...well, his sister anyway.

    *howl* hopefully that is the wolf one. Howlingly good.

    You even used emoticons for the title!

    I am honored, and surprised (like whats HernameGoes said) See all you serious poets out there...it is ok to be silly! My evil plan is working...to pave the way for StIcKy CaPs to become accepted on AP as real poetry. This is just the first step!

    Thanks for entering, I mean indulging my insanity, lol.


    • Peteskid gold member
      May 20
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      the honor is mine...good to be around people who know how to have fun... i'd heard a rumor there were a few of you still left on AP......PK

  • MariGoes gold member
    May 20

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    he feels desperate
    then prays for an idea to make things work
    waited but idea didn't come.
    the banging on the wall made he go crazy
    and he started to dance on the streets
    and everyone thought that is was


    Ah, didn't think you really would give this one a try. Am glad to see you step out of 'routine'. Having fun is healthy, keeps our BP normal

    v^


    • Peteskid gold member
      May 20

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      ahh BP should be normal but writing does not need to be...so this is good, fun contests...thanks for the idea...
  • ardentMarch gold member
    May 19
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    WOW!!!!! ...by far your best work...breathtaking ...stunning...gorgeous poetry here PK....very publishable




    lol..this is cute it definately tells a little story about reminders & memory fun stuff...I might have a go at this contest...


    • Peteskid gold member
      May 20
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      you ought to enter...we need to support the emerging art of Emotiku...this could replace that guy with the dog...PK
      • ardentMarch gold member
        May 20
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        and who is this guy and his dog, anyways?

        • Peteskid gold member
          May 20
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          some guy wrote about a dog...and put it up for comment about ten thousand times... people were up in arms...revolting poets!
      • ardentMarch gold member
        May 20

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        lol

        I will see what I can do...thinking of a metaphor right now..lol

        • Yemassee silver member
          May 20
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          Listen! "Do it, Do it, Do it!"

          That is your muse trapped inside your head telling you to enter!

          Now listen to it this time, but if it starts telling you to go out and start shooting people, well, you might want a second opinion before doing that one.

  • Kelli Marie silver member
    May 19

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    I guess the site isn't working well. This is an unusual contest, but . Good luck to you. I like this.
    Kelli
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