No faith
in yourself.
You stand mute,
hoping
another will lead
or take the
blame.
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words Once More - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Afraid
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I instantly was seeing a child on the playground being bullied
Heartbreaking to see~ it is like this child was taunted- called names and getting words: mother
protect but felt more like didn't understand~
hearing reference to brushed under the rug
Like Kids are being Kids type of situation~
Getting word: therapy reference to feeling of trauma- I'm nudged to mention~ when one is Mute
(not as in handicap reference to Mute) but Mute as in Silent it at times gives Strength to the one inflicting the pain
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
You stand mute,
Magnificent Voice spoken (Message)~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Nice thoughts...best of luck in the contest!
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A wonderfully written fifteen words. Makes you think about having no faith in one's self. Very nice. good luck
Kelli
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