Through the keyhole of
eternity I watch as time
slowly slips away with
the tide.
Author notes
Credit: Photobucket
15 words
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words Once More - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold IX - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended June 1, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Keyhole Of Eternity
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept hearing words: basket of goodies...
reference to baking- and this feeling of: for the grandchildren, for the grandchildren
Wild as it may sound...word: Mars
like 22 Seconds to Mars...even though there is a 30 Seconds to Mars band I believe For some reason I was getting 22 Seconds like a significance there
also reference to crawfish~
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...keyhole of eternity
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Perfect
Need I say any more? Effortlessly capturred the picute in its entirety.
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beautiful dark take on the pic, you spoke volumns in very few words...I saw the pic clearly with each word...excellent write...novy
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I liked "I watched as time slowly slips away with the tide. That was very good. well done
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speaks volumes in so few words. Very nice.
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